In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development
In this modern era, wearing traditional clothes becomes unfamiliar in several country than suits and jeans which is form west. There are several reasons for this interesting topic and I consent to be more disadvantageous which will be elaborated in the forthcoming paragraph.
Regarding the causes, the western clothes including suits and pants made from denim being people’s favorite cloth might be inflicted by well-known people who wear such cloth. In terms of the spread trend, western celebrities have a big fan basis throughout the world which probably imitate their idol’s fashion to be more similar. Furthermore, to wear such traditional clothes apparently are more complicated, not only how the way to use the cloth is but also restriction of the cloth aims. To illustrate, wearing Baju Bodo which traditional cloth from Indonesia have to represent the married events.
On the other side, this issue could bring drawback including disrespecting the people native culture. The more such traditional cloth disappear to be wore by people, the weirder the cloth is in the people view. Subsequently, the pride of its culture would diminish. In addition, if the clothes are not wore in the society, such culture do not exist anymore. Subsequently, the descendants would not know their native culture including their traditional one.
To sum up, being unfamiliar such traditional cloth taken over by western’s due to influence of western celebrity mode and complexity of wearing traditional clothes seems its causes. Meanwhile, it seems to me that disrespecting and exception of its native culture becoming its demerits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'worn'.
Suggestion: worn
...sh. In addition, if the clothes are not wore in the society, such culture do not exi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, while, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40625 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93707402164 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55859375 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3687556913 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.461538462 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369305614506 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13536213966 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111319047611 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223508519912 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430891455917 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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