In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. Why has this happened? what can be done to deal with this?
Several nations are recording high number of illegal activities which are caused by the public of age range from 13 to 19. This essay will explain why such scenario is occurring and also discuss what are the possible activities we can do in order to minimize it.
The incidents are increasing day-by-day that the youngsters are involving in unethical activities like consuming drugs, blackmailing, harassment, cybercrime etc. The adolescence is the time of increased risk-taking and impulsivity. For instance, we see that several children who are at college are reckless and restive. They don’t have a fear of their parents as well as guardian. If they think to do something, they can be ready to cross almost all limit to complete that which lead them to criminal behavior. Also, if those pupils are exposed to violence and traumatic experiences, they have a high chance of desensitization to violence. Thus, due to such cases, juveniles may have involved in such a deplorable instance.
Saving the striplings from committing scandalous activities have to become one of our responsibilities today because the files against them are raising continuously at police station. For this, many international organizations have to provide positive role models and mentoring programs for at-risk youth. For example, a United Nations Office Drugs and Crime (UNODC) is implementing the global strategy of UN to combat crimes with specific focus on youth and children which provide not only a technical assistant but also build capacity to governments, civil society as well as other partners. Beside this, we can increase the presence of community policing which paves the way to have a better connection with community results preventing crime and violence. Utilizing these aspects, we can deal with upraising collusion which is linked to minors.
In conclusion, adolescent delinquency is a very dangerous habit that has two probable causes including puberty and exposed to criminal milieu. A comprehensive seminar from different corporation related to youth in drugs & crimes and conducting several mentoring programs, the inclusion of teenybopper in complicity can be pruned.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 61, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...creasing day-by-day that the youngsters are involving in unethical activities like consuming ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41002949853 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0337832537 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625368731563 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8468604006 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.625 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155785588313 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437616054134 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451356190258 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894365949799 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358600250719 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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