Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities.
To what extent do you agree?
It is commonly argued that companies ought to offer sports and Social amenities. In my opinion, I Completely disagree with this notion as it's a financial burden to companies and its Government's responsibilty.
One of the main reasons why I disagree that multinational companies allocate money on amenities for locals is that it puts the financial burden on companies, especially if these amenities are not generating sufficient revenue to cover up the maintenance cost. In other words, Corporations have a lot of things to deal with Under a limited budget and resources like investments to thrive, employee salaries, and Company infrastructure. Therefore, investing in such facilities is not not possible, without Compromising their Care business operations. Also, these companies may lack expertise to operate these facilities effectively, making it a health hazard in the long term.
Secondly, it is the Government's obligation to provide sports venues and social facilities to people, ensuring the well-being and healthy growth of Society. Most of the government's income comes from the pockets of the general public through taxes and thus, private organisations are not obliged for this investment, Additionally, if Companies invest in such facilities not only will it divert the liability to the private sector, but also its impact would not be much fruitful for Companies to earn profit. Hence, to sustain operational and thrive, private companies should avoid funding sports and public services.
In Conclusion. I reiterate that State governments are in charge of offering sports and public facilities Instead of private companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57370517928 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10039523223 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597609561753 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.0964128077 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.9 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2372076506 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842098810835 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525420333778 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13148172647 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466139643098 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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