Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Following the development of humanity, living’s quality has been significantly improved over the past decades and the population of the world keeps growing with an unstoppable pace. As a result, the rise in quantity of elderly people is progressively becoming a major concern to the society. Further in this essay, I will discuss the possible scenarios of the given problem.
First and foremost, the government ought to invest money into building nursing homes as it can provide old folks with many caring services. Not only can it offer assistance for them but it can also create a wonderful environment for elderly people to make friends and live joyfully. Along with that, new technology should be imported in order to support the well-being of the patients. Accordingly, the salary for nurses and doctors needs to be raised so that they can run the machines effectively and monitor the elders’ health.
Nonetheless, it is obvious that every single country is getting more crowded, therefore, many distress matters are required to be addressed by the government. For that reason, less attention would be put into elderly people management as the society is more attracted to other areas. With the booming numbers of old folks, it can come with pollution and economic difficulties. Moreover, food source could easily run out due to the great amount of demand. Because of that, society is unlikely to be able to cope the increasing of elderly people
In conclusion, the society is not capable of dealing with the rise of elderly folks. Regardless, if humans unite and cooperate, they can effortlessly solve the mentioned distress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14606741573 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81076098901 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6575162834 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.692307692 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28399610701 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889443431378 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741507237804 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148847783926 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817434909591 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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