Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment.
What damage does plastic do to the environment?
What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem?
Environmental protection is one of the urgent problems being concerned by both government and individuals. Reducing a huge number of trash in living areas both damages soil and harms to people’s health. In this essay, I will discuss this problem.
It is acceptable that the more population increases, the more polluted the environment is. To apply customers’ consumption, many plastic packaged products are produced. With over 1 century process to disolve plastic in soil, some lands can not be used to plant trees. Moreover, things made from plastic make water dirty. People throw directly hundreds of tons of garbage into water every day. Polluted water not only kills fish, marine plants and creatures in river and in oceans but is a factor causing people’s cancers as well.
Therefore, protecting environment should be done by both authorities and individuals. Local leaders have to introduce laws to plastic factories and businesses to force them to minimize plastic packaging products. In addition, governments should have programmes or talkshows about environment on media to show harmful effects to people and encourage people to use less packaging things.
In conclusion, proctecting the environment from pollution with plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging is authorities and individuals’ reponsibility. This needs governments’long- term stragedy and people’s high awareness
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun plastic seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much plastic', 'a good deal of plastic'.
Suggestion: much plastic; a good deal of plastic
...nt is. To apply customers’ consumption, many plastic packaged products are produced. With ov...
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Line 4, column 233, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erm stragedy and people’s high awareness
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67924528302 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14339282883 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674528301887 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9897945109 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372617135829 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115283585355 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104955880134 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228599779025 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101216671706 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.07 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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