In recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship between equality and personal achievement. Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in egalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual merits.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Recently, many people have become concerned about the relationship between equality and personal achievement. It is believed that egalitarianism has many forms in different societies. In my opinion, people should achieve their goals in parallel with the egalitarian beliefs.
On the one hand, it is considered that some people can reach success or failure depends on their qualifications, which is shaped their future, meanwhile, education also plays a crucial role in people`s life. For instance, well-educated people can achieve their goals more than less-educated people, such as get better job opportunities, gain more money, and get promoted. As a result, people who determine to achieve their goals don`t care neither egalitarian societies nor equality between men and women.
On the other hand, nowadays, people who support egalitarian societies believed that they can make more and more progress in their life and hit the highest point of success inside this environment. Not only individuals but also governments always look forward to egalitarianism and encourage its habitant toward it. For instance, women recently reached a high level of positions in many societies and its role has widened inside society, which is proved that women can do the same jobs like men at ease, thus it is important to maintain equality in societies` culture. Moreover, women and men play a significant role to enhance egalitarian in societies.
To conclude, some people thought that they can succeed or failed based of their qualifications and personal skills, however others believed that they can gain personal feat in egalitarian societies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51968503937 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05814039973 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574803149606 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.73421576 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.454545455 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355911513818 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129273661628 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614227926385 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218824368662 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340492922203 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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