Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.
It is indeed a true fact at thighlevel we can categorized of people in two categories one who loves to try new things others are like to stick with the same and native things. Both attitudes have their own pros and cons, As far as my opinion is concerned I strongly believe that one should be open and keep exploring new things that way he or she can enjoy the life fully.
To begin with, this is the era of globelization and we are coupled with different countries, states for several good reasons, Therefore, it is an added advantage for a person who is easy going and open for changes and like to try new things available accross the golbe. Having an attitude of explorer firstly give the sense of how to tackle and gel up with situations which are new or unexpected, moreover it makes one strong enough from inside and vibernt personality. To illustrate, an individual who is fond of visiting new places and learn about new culture and food can develop and adjusting and diverse perosnality which can benifit him in personal and professional life.
On the other hand, Individuals who are very much paticular about their food and habits can enjoy the comfort of predictable life and can avert the fear of unexpected scenarios. However, that attitude limit them in a certian atmosphere and surrounding and make them dependend to that. Consequently, if they happen to face any new or unexpected event they will find themselves stuck or in a problem. For example, An goverment employee who remained posted in his hometown for years and suddenly got a transfer to new place, will find a tough time and it has seen in many instances people either not joining at new places or resigne from the job.
To conclude, the world is full of diversity in terms of culture, food and geography, hence people who are open and keep trying new things can develop an ability to cope up with different situations by their own and this attitude also broden the specturm of thought process that is ultimately rseults in greater success in life. Whereas, people who kept themselves in shylo always find themselves in a hard time when they are away from their acquented surrounding.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'categorize'
Suggestion: categorize
...indeed a true fact at thighlevel we can categorized of people in two categories one who lov...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...usting and diverse perosnality which can benifit him in personal and professional...
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ely rseults in greater success in life. Whereas, people who kept themselves in shylo al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72559366755 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61540798929 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559366754617 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5983003047 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.818181818 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4545454545 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2727272727 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301892909978 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108675816493 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571527423127 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189722212696 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367489209409 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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