Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Whether the youth population of a society should follow traditional customs is a contentious issue. Personally, I still firmly believe that cultural norms should be upheld even while I accept that young people should legitimately have a certain amount of autonomy.
The youth should uphold society customs for a number of important reasons. Traditions initially play the part of preserving a society's identity. Traditions are by definition all the customary ways of doing things and beliefs that have been accumulated over time by previous generations; as a result, they represent the ingrained standards and values of the community. Therefore, it is crucial for young people to uphold these traditions in order to foster social cohesiveness and unity as well as to maintain a sense of continuity with the past. The youth can also gain a lot from the knowledge and insight of earlier generations by adhering to traditions. As a result, individuals can spare themselves the time and effort-consuming trial and error in life.
However, it is still necessary to accept that young people have certain rights to act in a free manner. The fundamental reason is that some traditions may be largely irrelevant or even repressive in light of the current situation, making their observance pointless. For instance, due to women's increasing knowledge and aspirations for individual independence and respect, Vietnam's historical culture of misogyny and gender imbalance has now almost completely disappeared. Furthermore, it is only natural for young people to aspire to individualize in the current age of globalization. Adopting radical ideals and creative habits from other cultures does, undoubtedly, contribute to a unique, less restrained life. However, attention must still be exercised to avoid adopting improper traditions and behaviors, such as cohabitation or promiscuity.
Young people should maintain their individualism, but only to the extent that it is consistent with their traditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53594771242 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17285089224 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581699346405 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7627949544 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.933333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293279852362 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908144297664 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634937762682 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19068255417 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478740039988 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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