Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is perceived by many that professionals, such as doctors and engineers should be asked to work in the nation where they did research and got training while others have a belief that they should be allowed to work in another country which they love to. Both of opinion will be fully analyzed in the essay along with my personal viewpoint.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why engineers as well as doctors should work for the country where they studied and did research, one of which is that it is a good way to illustrate their gratefulness to those who trained them. Indeed, to become professionals, they have to take a lot of difficult courses so that they can reach the quality standard to work in medical or constructional fields. During the time they studied in university, they received an abundance of lessions from their teachers and professional who have much a lot experience and be willing to share those information with them. Thanks to their teachers, students become next generation who are able to work and contribute as professionals. For example, students who studied in medical university in Vietnam should show their gratefulness to their professionals through working for Vietnam hospitals. The other point which also need to be consider is that those doctors and engineers are crucial workforce of the nation, specially developing countries. In other words, it is challenge for a country to develop if it is lack of high educational workforce.
On the other hand, I am convinced that those who are doctors or engineers should work in any nations as they wish to because of many reasons. Concerning the first, if they live in a developed country where there are a lot people who have high educated like them, the government should let them work for another country which needs their helps to contribute for common development of countries all over the world. For instance, American doctors should move to Vietnam not only to work but also to help in enhance the development in Vietnam as well as whole world in general speaking. Concerning the second, if doctors and engineers live and studied in a developing country, their government should let them work freely in developed nations because they can improve and gain knowledge while they are working there. As a result, they can come back their country and share their invaluable experience to next generation in their own country.
In conclusion, it is too much to cover all benefits and drawbacks of both view points, so the aforementioned analyzed are main ideals which raise concerns. I hold a strong belief that professionals should be free to work in any country which they are interested.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
... lot experience and be willing to share those information with them. Thanks to their teachers, st...
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Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...e other hand, I am convinced that those who are doctors or engineers should work in any...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 7.30460921844 301% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2236.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 453.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93598233996 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77759815022 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448123620309 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 681.3 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2621239526 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.75 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3125 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482843598421 0.244688304435 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175527360564 0.084324248473 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11971638218 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.337474923426 0.151304729494 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794678103104 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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