Many people think there is a general increase in anti-social behavior and a leck of respect for others. What do you think are the causes of this and how to improve it? What solutions can you suggest?
In the technological developing society nowadays, many a person could access social network easily so that a significant increase of anti-social behavior and a lack of respect for other people might be expanded. From my perspective, there are two main reasons of the issue such as simple approach to the Internet and lack of human awareness of respect. I would like to elaborate the suggested solutions on it in details with the below explanation-essay.
In the first place of notion, it is noticeable that there are many causes leading to anti-society reactions nowadays; however, the popular reasons can be very easy to access the Internet and lack of ethics for respecting other persons. First of all, Vietnam is the country with expanded Internet network and lower fee than other developing countries; therefore, most of the citizens can connect together on the Internet and reach daily information. However, the information from the Internet may be fake or unofficial, leading to create unsuitable reactions for other people. For example, pupils can utilize laptop when they were children when they have not verified the information; based on this, they can aware wrong methods about the information and give out anti-social behaviors. On the other hand, there are less of ethical classes to guide awareness and ethics from schools so that the young generation cannot control their behaviors. The current education system is focusing on academic knowledge and forgetting to train soft skills in order to adapt suitable thoughts in modern life.
In terms of the suggestions to solve the problem, in my opinion, the government should control Internet access capacity and innovate education system concentrating on ethical teaching. For more details, the increase of Internet fee should be considered to create a polite viral environment with good-mannered citizens; also, there is selection of participants when joining the Internet leading to have healthy atmosphere and avoid anti-social actions. In addition, the innovation of teaching guideline should be applied for extra courses about ethical thinking and self-help trainings; based on this, the young generation can approach the right behaviors when they were students and help to decrease anti-social reactions in the future. For instance, from the primary school system, the government can organize social classes with real-life activities to consolidate children's human awareness and train suitable reactions for respecting other people in society.
To sum up, anti-social manners are a hot issue nowadays in many developing countries, the main causes are complicated Internet approach and lack of human awareness about respect for other people. The government can consider taking advantage of Internet with the appropriate methods and improve national education structure for ethical teaching.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2428.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 439.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53075170843 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90774822064 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49430523918 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 759.6 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5630519473 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.866666667 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2666666667 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4666666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233198379654 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820900611519 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594265113569 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163649321123 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211905568379 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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