How important is deess code in our lives. doyounconsider dressing appropriately or you of the opinion that everyone should be able to wear exactly what tehy like.
A proper attire is essential in our daily lives.It provides an individual with an identity and make sure impartial treatment prevails all around.In my opinion,I highly believe that this system is truly justified.The upcoming essay will bolster my viewpoint with logical reasons.
A dress code ensures that everyone is treated equally. Similair clothing tends to eliminate the chance of nitpicking others the way they dress like kinder garden kids can make fun of the poorly dressed shabby child of all and to stress about spending more on clothing to avoid this prejudice. School uniforms for example is a way to overcome this partiality and make them all equal in front of teachers eyes.Hence ,code of conduct is necessary not just for schooling institutes but also hospitals, companies and many more places ensuring fair system is being delivered to everyone.
Dress code also provides people with their unique identity proof. Dressing appropriately for ones job is expected for one to maintain their reputation and status among others.For example, in hospitals those with white coats are doctors and nurses are usually in color of green. While the rest of staff is grey. It not helps patients and attendent differentiate between their roles but also they other way around. that is why proper uniform is must for ones identification.
To conclude, dressing properly is important as it helps ensuring fair and imparial treatment is given to all individuals and also imparts a sense of identity to the one who wears it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14112903226 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6817850872 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633064516129 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.2253150698 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118558315866 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500992313007 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483065938721 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676985756132 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265128438205 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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