Children are now less active in their free time than in the past. Therefore, sports lessons must be compulsory in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that education systems must list physical lessons as compulsory courses because youngsters are likely to lose interest in outdoor activities. I totally agree with this statement by following explanation.
I completely agree with the idea that schools must put their priority on student’s sports courses to encourage student in personal training. The first prominent justification is that the permanent physical lessons can be a first stepping stone of a long term healthy habit. Furthermore, subject teachers have professional experiences in physical training so they can build the suitable and effective exercises for their student’s ages, conditions, hobbies. For example, some student might not be excellent in sports so teachers should create the training plan that enhance their abilities gradually. More importantly, there would be a case that student may have the morning athletics lessons twice a week in order to build not only their physical strength but also wellbeing habit.
Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, there are two other reasons should be discussed. The second reason is educational institutions have a resource to invest sporting facilities like football field, swimming pool or stadium so that they provide variety interesting activities for student to take part in. For instance, British children are often involved in a playing soccer due to the fact that the UK schools have many stadiums so the student have a better chance to play in the actual field. Last but not least, the final reason could be the joyful time playing sports with friends could make students be more energetic.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, I firmly hold the view that education systems must set athletics courses as permanent lessons in order to encourage youngster’s positive lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4425087108 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80921818865 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602787456446 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7014018765 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.166666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172502672016 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652849629365 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332396291833 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963638853889 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317584916498 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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