Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is, in your opinion, the most important thing to succeed in life?
In today’s world, there are several circumstances that have been extremely successful without any professional certifications at schools or colleges. In this essay below, I will mention the main elucidation for the above phenomenon as well as my opinion to illustrate what are the considerable aspects to get successful.
Although there is a variety of reasons for this phenomenon, I suppose the main is that these individuals are exceedingly hard-working to reach an achievement. It is obviously true that the most significant advantage of studying at educational institutions is to assimilate knowledge and skills from experts directly, however, the vast difference between students and people who worked early without any qualifications is the experience. Successful humans such as Bill Gates accessed the business environment early, practiced vocational skills, and experienced empirical evidence related to their transition which rarely occurred in studying space. As a result, people who have no degrees in education, being such successful due to more experience which is not prevalent at schools.
In order to succeed in life, I suppose the most considerable element is proficient and related essential skills. When people have good communication skills, for example, they will have an advantage in solving commercial disputes, and negotiating contracts with their business’s partners which will contribute to the overall success for their enterprise. Moreover, if people have such skills for transitions, they can handle the chores better, save time and utilize it for other fundamental tasks which is really best for business development.
In conclusion, despite failure in universities, these people can be successful thanks to their determination and hard work. However, the effort is not sufficient, from my point of view, the most important contribution to success in life is skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, really, so, well, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66433566434 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21827268648 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604895104895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6204479639 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.272727273 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150916270048 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641195388343 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501539203571 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101445158892 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483425290682 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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