young people watch entertainment programs
In recent years, the young people often choose to watch entertainment programs instead of news and education programs. This has become a trend in the general public. In my opinion, I think there are some reasons and effects for this problem. Discuss below are several ideas in favor of my perspectives.
First and foremost, there are many reasons why cause that the young people choose to watch entertainment instead of news and education programs. Firstly, the entertainment programs are very interesting for young people. They have singing shows which have many famous singers. In addition, there are many hot films for teenagers. Secondly, the entertainment programs have some content suitable for young people. The young people prefer watching singing shows or movies to watching a math lesson on TV.Finally, the entertainment shows do not make young people stress. The young people get tired after working hard so they watch entertainment programs.
Therefore, this trend causes many serious effects. For example, not watching news programs makes young people not get much information from all over the world. That information is very important for young people to know about the world. Moreover, the education shows provide much knowledge for young people to learn in the class.The young people can lose much important knowledge which is not taught at the school.
In conclusion, the young people choose to watch entertainment programs instead of news and education programs which has some reasons and effects. So young people should watch the shows suitable for themself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.344 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66150032876 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1596295769 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5882352941 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7058823529 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.601737043214 0.244688304435 246% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220206542573 0.084324248473 261% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.183870854615 0.0667982634062 275% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.436467707897 0.151304729494 288% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143130400106 0.056905535591 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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