In the future, it is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people in some countries. Is this positive or negative development?
It is considered that the percentage of the older people will increase more than the young people in several years in some nations. I will explain in this essay why it has benefits and drawbacks that affect society for a long time.
On the one hand, it provides some advantages when having more the elder. First of all, the old people are able to support the parents and look after children when they are up to their ears in work. Not only that, it is also helpful for children who are accustomed to receiving traditional stories and knowledge. Besides that, they also have more time to engage in charity work such as gathering together in order to collect garbage. When traveling in local areas, for example, the traveler can get lost from time to time. However, they are helped by the older generation who often go for a walk or get exercise outside on the street.
On the other hand, there are many disadvantages. Firstly, it makes adults bear a greater financial burden when they do not have enough money and they have a lot of children to pay daily expenses. Additionally, it makes the government shoulder much more responsibilities because they have to pay pensions or build nursing homes to take care of old people.
In conclusion, the increasing rate of older people represents a negative development in Japan as well. It has an impact on a lack of labor to contribute and improve communities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, look, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73577235772 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65564162013 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60162601626 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6791521275 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6153846154 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126391932098 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474238242551 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721882668674 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999918276588 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844570671393 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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