Some people think that radio is the best way to get news while others think that television is better for this purpose.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although it is believed by major strata Society that broadcasting is the Superior way to Obtain news, others opine that TV is the prime to gain knowledge about news. This essay intends to analyze both viewpoints, I, however, base the latter thought.
Admittedly, one of the major reasons behind Such grave concern could be accessibility. This is due to the fact that radio is accessible to a broader audience majorly in areas with limited access to electricity. people can listen to the radio on their smartphones, car and battery-operated devices. To Illustrate in a better way, A Study carried out by 'AIR FM GOLD showed that in the rural village of Rajasthan, 65% of people rely on FM in order to know about the news because of limited access to electricity. probing further, broadcasting mostly provides information about local news related to Community issues, events or any updates. Thus, If people can listen to the radio, they get more relevant and reliable information about their region.
Despite audio providing portability and local news, the advantages of getting news from TV cannot be neglected. Visualising effects provided by TV offer a more immersive experience. Since it makes complex information easier to comprehend. To put out a Convincing example, An article published in "The Times "suggests that 85% of Americans choose to get aware of news through television and video telecasting because they found it effortless to grasp. Therefore, it is better to use TV rather than radio, if an individual found it an arduous task to understand.
In my opinion, to get aware of information, TV is a Constructive way because it not only provides audio with Videos but it provides instant updates regarding any issues or events.
In Conclusion, even though radio is beneficial for rural areas where electricity is low, I deem that television is a great choice to be aware of news because it provides real-time Videos.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: People
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Probing
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y TV offer a more immersive experience. Since it makes complex information easier to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12225705329 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99195240083 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583072100313 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5212826441 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.933333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192573663878 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057942619269 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341342253292 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101738671569 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218590630035 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.