Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In this day and age, it has raised public concerns over the past decades that a growth of sick people are making an attempt on alternative medicines or treatments, in lieu of depending on the doctors. Although there are some merits of money, I would argue that there are far more demerits and in this essay, I will support my idea with examples.
The main perks of the trend towards individuals can save their money instead of splurging on medical costs. In most countries in the world, the amount of money that is spent on doctors and medicines is higher than their monthly income. Therefore, trying other treatments which fit their budget is like scoring some great deals. A prime example of that is the limited budget of overseas students which has prevented them from visiting doctors when having some health problems. They saved their money at the expense of their health. If they get wrong methods, they will pay a heavy price, compared with the price they pay for the medical costs.
Despite some positives, I believe that visiting doctors as usual is a positive way for various reasons. Firstly, doctors have been schooled for a long time to save people. They are enough knowledge to recognize and treat one's health in the right way. For example, in Viet Nam which has not been developed enough medical expertise, people who are in the moneyed classes are willing to spend the enormous amount of money on medical expenses in the developed countries such as the United States, Japan, among others. Regarding the privileged, the onus of very high costs on medicines is on the governments. The governments should make a joint to reduce the costs for the poor. Secondly, a person can detect other illness early to have a timely plan for treatment.
In conclusion, while there are beneficial effects on this development, I strongly believe that visiting doctors is the best treatment to treat timely and correctly the health problems that people are getting.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...enough knowledge to recognize and treat ones health in the right way. For example, i...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88358208955 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4587557956 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561194029851 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2671848749 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.25 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249025804798 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733325361759 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499450258475 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148444998601 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369771253938 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...enough knowledge to recognize and treat ones health in the right way. For example, i...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88358208955 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4587557956 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561194029851 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2671848749 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.25 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249025804798 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733325361759 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499450258475 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148444998601 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369771253938 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.