Claim: Young people's tendency to make extensive use of portable devices like smartphones and tablets has hurt their development of social skills.
Reason: These devices encourage users to form artificial personalities and relationships online rather than fully and honestly engaging with the people around them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The advent of technological devices such as smart phones has proven advantages that have significantly improves human lives in various ramifications. These benefits, however are not without disadvantages; the most salient of these is the detrimental effects on social interactions of young people. Therefore, I fully agree with the claim and the reasoning on which it is based. And in this response I will explain my stance.
A extensive use of protable devices like android smart phone as resulted in the advent of remote jobs where people can work from their various homes without having to physically interact with their fellow workers. This back up the reason stated in the prompt. Individual develop personalities that are not a true depiction of who they are, and this megatively affects their ability to socialize with people in real life. The occurrence of the COVID-19 pandemic saw munerous organizations retreat to remote working. At after the pandemic numerous studies showed that workers were reluctant to resume work physically This is mostly likely because they had developed ersatz personalities which they could not maintain in real social interactions. This significantly affect their ability to relate with one another physically.
Secondly, extensive use of portable devices has significantly affect the ability of individuals to develop and maintain inter-personal relationships; both platonic and romantic. This is more evident by the plethora of social medial sites and dating sites. Though these social accounts, a young lady can create an a fake persona that is not a true depiction of who she is. This results in problems especially when she goes on a blind date which someone she has not met before. The inability to live up to or maintain that alternate personality affects her ability to socialize with other individuals.
However, we should not be quick to disregard the numerous advantages of that are available due to extensive use of smart devices. One major advantage is work-on-the-go, where people are able to do their daily activities anywhere and everywhere without being limited by space or time. Some people have even been able to acquire social skills through their use of smart phones.
In summary, while the use of smart devices have advantage, they also have numerous disadvantages. One of this is the adverse effect on human interpersonal relationships which is manifested through poor interpersonal relationships between workers and inability to develop and maintain relationships. This reason back up the claim and the reasoning upon which it is developed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...s response I will explain my stance. A extensive use of protable devices like ...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'affected'.
Suggestion: affected
...e of portable devices has significantly affect the ability of individuals to develop a...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: an; a
...ocial accounts, a young lady can create an a fake persona that is not a true depicti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2206.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36739659367 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01575791338 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523114355231 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 719.1 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.1690985263 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.047619048 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239336879187 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678161126641 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478942740403 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133290790858 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161466911017 0.0667264976115 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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