Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Renovation is a popular method of sustaining the quality of various construction after years of service. Yet, there is an idea that, dated building, which would cost tremendous resources to maintain and restore should be deconstructed. Them the saved materials would be utilized for more modern building project. In my opinion, I totally agree with this notion
First and foremost, retaining old building structures should be discouraged due to their outdated architectural purposes. Specifically, in term of the designs, many buildings were constructed in accordance with the need of their short term period, which might last a few decades. Yet, the societal and economical progresses require drastic changes, which surpass functionalities of the designs that many old building are envisioned. Hence, committing vast resources both financially and materially would be ill-advised as the meticulousness in changing the core structure of any constructions would necessitate the use of expensive renovation work and arduous labor.
Moreover, it is highly economical to invest in new buildings because of the potential longevity promised by updated construction technology. Generally speaking, a new construction project introduces the opportunities to apply various advanced techniques that not only well utilize building materials and valuable time, but also ensure better quality by applying new architectural mindsets and latest technology. For example, instead of using conventional materials and continue the service of old appliances, my new house has employed new type of compounded brick and structure frame, which prolong the construction integrity. Additionally, my house is equipped with latest technology, which allows more comfort while energy use is well managed.
In conclusion, since old buildings were infused with dated designs, which proves to be unfit for temporary need, the construction of new structure on their stead is highly recommended as the buildings would be designed to last longer and offer better convenience. .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79139072848 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18585287328 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599337748344 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.168975025 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.75 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155969907007 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650375815517 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482663074148 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106012417422 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245923136523 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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