Many women are choosing to have children later in life. Why is this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
The decision to have children at a later age is becoming increasingly in modern life. This trend can be explained by a combination of factors in this essay and I personally think that the disadvantages of this likely outweigh the advantages.
It is necessary to clearly understand the causes of this phenomenon. Among them, many adults these days tend to place a large emphasis on career development. Fields such as finance, technological and healthcare can be rather dynamic, thus requiring a significant investment of time. Consequently, there is no doubt that concentration on profession would take time away both males and females. Therefore, thanks to the development of medical, women can afford to delay childbirth via pills or medical procedures. This reason proves that having children at a later age depends on the circumstances and preferences of adults.
Consequently, this decision could bring both positive and negative impacts on society. Firstly, one of the main advantages is children can grow up in financially secure households. This provides children with many resources and opportunities. However, older parents might struggle to keep up with their offspring. For parents whose age gap with their children is significant, their levels of energy as well as enthusiasm might not be the same as younger parents. This would translate to less physical and emotional support that a child could receive from older parents than younger ones. Thus it could be seen that this development possesses more drawbacks than benefits.
In conclusion, although this decision has many benefits, it is usually more disadvantageous to give birth at a later age. Regardless of the base of preference and circumstance of time having children, I argue that it should not come too late.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30281690141 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08886116248 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5036394968 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.5882352941 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288676352276 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847101100975 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735984883777 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188299584861 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695532246722 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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