We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is a notion that it is impossible for mankind to provide financial and mental support to individuals that need help because people should prioritize their own fellows who live in the same society and nation. Personally, i hold a firm belief that instead of trying to support people in need, it is more important to concentrate on the development of their own countries and communities.
To begin with, the capability of providing financial aids to people around is not a popular trend. To exemplify, the majority of citizens does not seem to originate from wealthy backgrounds. This means that the low-income learners and medium-income earners tend to pay more attention to their personal expenses rather than giving care to others’ living conditions. Therefore, it would be unjustifiable to ask people who struggle with their life to give others a hand. Take the average income of vietnamese workers as a salient example. Because of the high living standards in this country, especially in ho chi minh city, people tend to work industriously to fulfil their life rather than caring the situations of people in need unreasonably.
However, for dwellers in developing nations and third-world countries, it would be more practical and doable to focus on giving assistance to whom are seeking. To elaborate, in modern era, there have been numerous establishments of international organizations such as WHO, which specializes in global fundraising to financially generate aids to international citizens who have severe damage to their health. As a result, it could be more realistic and applicable for rightful institutions with a wide range of sufficient resources to initiate supportive campaigns for a healthier community.
Taking everything into consideration, this consolidates my perspective that one of the most worrying issues in the world is to concern the general circumstance of people’s community to give it further improvement instead of caring each other only.
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, third, well, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36858974359 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17084063906 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599358974359 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.424263189 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.583333333 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126498218693 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446918016981 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327733146249 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764268543884 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222393681746 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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