In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should be required to step down after five years.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Power should let down in politics, education, government, business after five years. The speaker claims so, it may rise several issures like dictatorship in those mentioned sectors. However, there are several nuances, which should be considered in oreder to decide which path might pursue. On balance, it is imperative that, for better output and keep balance in the mentioned area, power should be let down in every five years. Therefore, I mostly agree with the claim.
To begin with, the first and foremost point coming to the mind that, to prevent dictatorship, it is crucial to change power. For supporting example, one need look no further than the middle east country ,where no democracy exist. Moreover, second vital point is, if changing trend is practiced, everyone get rid from boring monotonous same task. If we pay attention in the workstation, where time shifting is changed per week, as a result, the workers become revival and not getting bored of monotonous same task. From the above scenario, it is evident that letting power is essential for large benefit.
To further understand, the crucial point should be taken into consideration that, to keep balance in any sector it is imperative. To illustrate that, let us take an example of the selection of army chief of staff, where, the chief changes in a regular time basis. Consequently, every qualified get chance to serve. Similarly, if the changing trend is not practiced, corruption may rise in that section as the explanation in reduced. I would like to point out vivid example is that, if the manager is continue his duty from the last 10 years, the managed a sindicate and can make corruption easily. Consequently, it is pretty obvious from the mentioned point and exaple that changing of power bears success.
On the contrary, under some circumstances, it take long time to cope with the new system, if the system changes after 5 years. For instance, if the government changes in a regular basis, all the authority take time to cope with the new government strategy. Similarly, changing a system will bring success. For example, in Bangladesh, educational curricullum changed in 2023, where written test evaluation system is rescind and practical test evaluation is introduced, where every student is evaluated by pracitical knowledge.
In a nutshell, due to the aforementioned reasons and examples, it is clear that, in order to consider large scope of development, it is necessary to change power in politics, business, education, government sectors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, similarly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2129.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15496368039 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83393330873 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537530266344 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.598812492 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.380952381 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.21951772744 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133593860513 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417607072014 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486472594108 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774173960888 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543951306985 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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