It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Today, it is believed that outdoor places like squares and parks are essential for all towns and cities. Although public outdoor spaces may result in a minor uptick crime, I personally believed that they also play a crucial role in the development of urban areas and the well-being of citizens.
On the one hand, communal spaces can sometimes accidentally leverage the crime rates. The main reason is that in some areas, public outdoor spaces can become hotbeds for illegal activities such as drug dealing and using because of the absence of adequate security measures including sufficient lighting, surveillance, and regular patrols. As a consequence, these spaces may pose safety risks for residents. For example, in Ho Chi Minh city, there are a lot of parks which have become drug consumption places. Therefore, these public spaces can be not essential.
On the other hand, it is my firm belief that communal spaces are still of considerable importance. First, outdoor places such as parks and squares may enhance air quality in urban areas. This is mainly because plants in these places can absorb various air pollutants and emissions from vehicles, which may contribute to urban greening and mitigate the effects of climate change. For example, the green belt in Singapore has significantly reduced levels of particulate matter, a major cause of air pollution. Second, residents' physical health and mental health can be improved with public spaces. One of the reasons is that communal spaces provide facilities for exercise, relaxation, and social interaction. As a result, they can help people to reduce stress and become healthier.
In conclusion, while public places can become potential sites for criminals, I am firmly convinced that they are still necessary for urban life since they helps reduce pollution and improve the well-being of residents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29292929293 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70307257898 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5136641212 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.8 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186003977947 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068121992906 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805553823232 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125835563984 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515247834577 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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