Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and town is more important than building houses.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals prioritized culturing trees in empty places in cities instead of building houses. I personally agree with this statement and will discuss my reasons in the following.
To commence with, green landscapes would have two main benefits for urban areas. Firstly, the rate of air pollution would effectively reduce in megacities. To explain this vividly, a majority of trees are able to adsorb poisonous chemicals especially CO2, which is extensively emitted by vehicles and factories on the air. Eventually, those trees convert this gas to oxygen and release it on the atmosphere. As everyone knows, oxygen is vital for breathing and make the air clean and healthy. Moreover, vegetation areas assist the citizens to decrease their stress. As a matter of fact, at the moment, a majority of people who live in metropolitans have a hectic life style. As the research shows presenting in such green areas can help people to get away from their anxiety.
Nevertheless, some people opine that the authorities ought to build more houses in the urban area than green landscapes. In fact, they are concerned about the accommodation which the residents need to live. They declare the population are becoming on the rise in the large cities as a large number of individuals prefer to immigrate to the cities because of the better and more job opportunities and welfare facilities. However, in many megacities on the world, the governments resolved this issue by establishing skyscraper buildings.
To conclude, the authorities ought to make a balance between constructing apartments and establishing green areas. I opine both of them essential for residents in urban areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, as to, in fact, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24535315985 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94906854666 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598513011152 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1197386844 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138501196514 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389763886728 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619188462702 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834958547298 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638081376456 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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