Climate change and about the roles that Government, Corporate, and Individuals can play to improve it
Its no doubt that the change in climate is not good for anyone. But since 19th century, depletion in environment is continuously growing causing a serious threat to the earth's environmental habitat. This essay will discuss the possible reasons for this and roles of different entities such as government, corporates, and individuals.
To start with, Government should be more active and strict when it comes to environment measures. Government should pass strong law to protect environment. Government should encourage people and industrialists to help in avoiding any possible damage to our environment. For instance, Government of India initiated Clean India movement to make people aware about clean and healthy surroundings. These little efforts yield big results in long time. Also, government should be less reliable on fossil fuels to protect the environment.
Also, corporate houses should also implement proper and secure ways to dispose any wastes. Industrial waste is responsible for water and sand pollution and corporate houses must acknowledge and solve these problems. Also, they should encourage their employees about the importance of clean and healthy climate.
When it comes to individuals, they should be most aware and responsible towards climate change. An individual should make a habit to properly dispose of wastes and should not litter. They should use least air conditioners, refrigerators, and private vehicles to minimize their energy consumption in any form as these things are responsible for the greenhouse effect.
In a nutshell, Government, Corporate, and Individuals should be responsible towards environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
Its no doubt that the change in climate is ...
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Line 6, column 196, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'use the least'.
Suggestion: use the least
...stes and should not litter. They should use least air conditioners, refrigerators, and pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, no doubt, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.75862068966 330% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70850202429 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03731701155 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591093117409 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2063051863 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.125 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4375 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10176272987 0.242375264174 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366901809836 0.0925447433944 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539130037628 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778185906234 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662253734053 0.0609392437508 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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