Communication has changed significantly in the last ten years. Discuss the positive and negative impacts of this change.
Communication is been changing throughout the past decade rapidly. There are so many merits and demerits of communication to the society. In this essay I will discuss on them deeply.
Firstly, people do not have to travel place to place to know about them bcause they can communicate with them through communicational devices. The cost of travelling will be minimized while there are so many options available to communicate such as viber, whatsapp, messenger, gmail and twitter.
On the other hand the effection between people will be spoiled because they do not meet each other. Not only that rumours can be spread within few seconds. Moreover rumours can also effectthe ehole world due to globalization. Also the portion of expenditure allocated on communication is highly increased due to the new features innovated over the past decade. Besides above reasons number of accidents has been occurred by people using communicational devices while driving.
In conclusion, communicational advancement can be used for people’s betterment. For an instance an emergency situation government can use communicational devices in conveying warning messages. It is individual’s responsibility to use technology for their progress than wasting their valuable time on searching gossips in internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'place to'.
Suggestion: place to
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...mours can be spread within few seconds. Moreover rumours can also effectthe ehole world ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, moreover, second, so, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 197.0 242.827586207 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64974619289 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33267964078 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664974619289 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2363112873 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6153846154 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112372984773 0.242375264174 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455662120164 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425491039023 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831007753835 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635025416229 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 53.1260098522 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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