Companies use advertisements to influence people to buy things sometimes which they don’t need. Give your opinion about this practice?
Recently, the phenomenon of the idea that advertisements are utilized by companies for some unnecessary products in order to incease their sales and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate among the populations. Although advertising is one of the successful ways to sell the products, some people argued that they should use just for necessary needs. I am inclined to believe that this way is beneficial for campanies and people should consider all aspects to purchase the products.
From a social standpoint, there are several discussion about the implementing some advertising schemes for some prodects which are not in the initial necessities by companies. These factors are rooted in the fact of industrial development. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the reasons of this utilizing. Firstly, the sale policies in companies are not directly base on dwellers' needs. An array of products are manufactured annunally and due to devoid the bankrupts, companies should consider all srategies to sell their prodeucts. Undoubtedly, adds have strong impacts on citizens' attitudes and can lead to enhance the sale rate.
Furthermore, another asppect of using adds to develop the sales figures even for the products that have not the strong needs for people is avoiding the investment. A considerable amount of time and money was spent for constructing these such factories and if they cannot succeed to sell their products, all their investments will be wasted. In this way, people have responsibility to enhance their awareness to recognize the piriority of meeting their needs.
In conclusion, while there are several reasons of using advertising methods to sell the unnecessary products, I profoundly believe that factories should use this potential to enhance their revenue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun discussion seems to be countable; consider using: 'several discussions'.
Suggestion: several discussions
... From a social standpoint, there are several discussion about the implementing some advertising...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43298969072 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02755966862 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54295532646 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2031351802 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.615384615 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160528708131 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572487711975 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372442959159 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104806152824 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139855491251 0.0609392437508 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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