Discuss whether design of building will have a positive or negative impact on people’s life work???
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals the design of building have negative or positive impact on people has always been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always intrigued to analyze and explain. Regarding this, I would like to say that building have both impact on people good or bad. Let’s delve deeper about this in forthcoming paragraph.
One compelling argument in favor of my stance on this issue has to do with the fact that the design of building have a good infrastructure which motivates to people. This is because infrastructure shows the beauty of building . Furthermore, masses work harder with full dedication. As a result, people wants to show their ability or their work with good architecture design.
Looking back at the introduction, one could also argue that design of building have a negative impact on people’s life or work . Firstly, natural sources such as air and sunlight in the building can have the tremendous effect on the workforce . Last but not least, in the buildings architecture used air condition air which spread many of disease in human life’s.
Hence, based on the arguments above, we can conclude that design of building have negative or positive impact on people but people should also try to make a building with full of good environment , infrastructure, materials, so that it gives only the good, better or best impact on people’s life .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, look, regarding, so, as to, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09411764706 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93790520307 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552941176471 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6419382146 50.4703680194 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9230769231 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.471745286558 0.242375264174 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16290104278 0.0925447433944 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12108449288 0.071462118173 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300772949822 0.151781067708 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817155652875 0.0609392437508 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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