do you think our life is better than our forefathers?
It is often being argued that we are experiencing an improved lifespan than our ancestors led centuries ago. This essay completely agrees with the notion since less time required to fulfill the work and better health facilities.
Perhaps the first evidence of improved quality of life is the reduction of time taken to complete the tasks. The jobs consider laborious and would take days to perform, decades ago, can now be done in a blink of an eye. Communication is the most obvious example of that, in the 18th century a written letter needed a postman and days of travelling to reach the destination. In the current scenario, however, the e-mail virtually takes only a few clicks and a couple of minutes to deliver the message to the recipient on the other corner of the world.
Also, the other reason of my firm believe that current lives are far better than ever before is fewer health issues of present human race. The abundance of the medical facilities, as well as sophisticated medicines and medical procedures, are the reason of healthier and happier life. Compared to the past century, life expectancy rate is higher and fatal diseases like plague and cholera has completely disappeared. For instance, the introduction of polio vaccination has reduced the chances of polio breakout up to 100% in the current century.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that life quality is much more enhanced over the period of hundred years, the reduction of task-cycle, as well as the boosted health, are few out of different rationale to support my views.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 171, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun out seems to be countable; consider using: 'few outs'.
Suggestion: few outs
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93893129771 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70411160414 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618320610687 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5690620321 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.636363636 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12032379224 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386613492037 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411546411528 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669065607477 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459483065191 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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