"Education is a critical element of the prosperity of any nation. The more educated the people in a country are, the more successful their nation becomes."
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
It is evident that all educated nations in the world are the most wealthiest one. Some individuals believe that the countries with more erudite population are more prosperous and successful. This essay will discuss the reasons why a nation becomes more successful when it does have more educated citizens.
To begin with, education opens up many opportunities to people in any nation and make the nation more successful. More specifically, when people of a country get more and more educated, it equip them with particular requirement for a job and by getting employment, they bring financial growth to their nation. For example, the countries such as the USA and Australia are more developed because they have more educated people who helps in thriving the country in financial respects, however, the country like Africa is a poor nation because the number of illiterate people there are umpteen.
In addition, education teaches a right way to live. Most notably, educated people are less likely to commit unethical activities in society, that is also a sign of successful nation. An educated individual, for instance, have the better understanding of right and wrong deeds and they step ahead accordingly. Therefore, when a nation have more and more educated individuals automatically she will be more prosperous.
This essay discussed how education brings the prosperity to a nation in a financial manner and also it make its citizens more ethical which also add on to its success. In my opinion, the erudite population always brings success to their nations in several ways.
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| 2018-09-16 | Abhinash Jaiswal | 80 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'wealthiest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: wealthiest
...l educated nations in the world are the most wealthiest one. Some individuals believe that the ...
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Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the wealthiest'.
Suggestion: most the wealthiest
...l educated nations in the world are the most wealthiest one. Some individuals believe that the ...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'equips'?
Suggestion: equips
... country get more and more educated, it equip them with particular requirement for a ...
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Line 3, column 592, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of illiterate people there are umpteen. In addition, education teaches a right w...
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Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a financial manner" with adverb for "financial"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ation brings the prosperity to a nation in a financial manner and also it make its citizens more ethi...
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Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...ation in a financial manner and also it make its citizens more ethical which also ad...
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Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ccess to their nations in several ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.203125 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83377370965 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5084534849 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410281471761 0.242375264174 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171336107797 0.0925447433944 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711705208109 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274493142523 0.151781067708 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466017158019 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.