Experience is more effective and useful than books and formal education. What is your opinion?
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about effectiveness of experience over the formal education and books. While it is possible to claim that experience is the key for success in most of the carrier options, my view is that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, I shall explain my view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
There are several reasons why experience is the essential ingredient to one’s success. One of them is that with experience you must have understood most of the difficult situations which will come your way. it can also be argued that experience have helped the people come out of adverse situations and lead them to great success. For example - In the customer care domain, with the help of experience you will be able to handle customer queries and answer them promptly.
Those who argue that books and formal education is more important than experience have a different view and say that it can actually be a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that formal education is important aspects in the field of medicine and engineering. person need to have the formal education to excel in this field. Then, there is a concern if that person has cleared his exams legitimately. In the case of experience you can help in better manner than bookish language.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that experience is the best teacher. I would strongly recommend that experience should be given more preference than the formal education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
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...arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that experience is the best teacher....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, then, while, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95785440613 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7018264147 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536398467433 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1776434756 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.4285714286 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265576371836 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856219326488 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764918662585 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15744096296 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697108709613 0.0609392437508 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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