It is important to preserve the beautiful buildings of the past, even if it will be expensive to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it.
The heritage buildings are the pride icon for any country and its preservness and maintenance should not be the debatable topic for any kind of society. The frequent maintenance of this beautiful buildings are of course quite expensive and money should not be the matter for its caretaker or national heritage authorities. This essay will explain the importance of maintenance to this old building with the different method.
First and foremost, every beautiful thing comes with price tag and maintenance of same has to be done frequently to preserve it for a long run. The classic example is Indian national pride "The Taj Mahal" which is taking care by many governors and heavy amount money has been spending on it on daily basis to maintain its beauty forever.
Secondly, the surrounds of this building should be neat and clean and keep under monitoring regularly to attracts more tourist else people's start neglecting this heritage and this could be converted into the gloomy fort. For example, the vicinity of The Taj Mahal is cleaned regularly by its staff to keep it safe and secure else it had been a ruin.
Overall I reckon that the fortified of the heritage building with its beauty should not be a matter of money and has to be maintained by its normal routine by its caretakers as it's our national pride.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...its normal routine by its caretakers as its our national pride.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, i reckon, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91150442478 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62852715123 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544247787611 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.4480168539 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.75 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 20.9669160288 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 7.25397266985 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21495303942 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105296709785 0.0925447433944 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564829307169 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142111402155 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610709275423 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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