These days, there is an ongoing debate among people about the law and the vast majority believe that it controls human behaviour. While the notion of law has hundreds of years of history, some people deter to consider law changes people. In this essay, I shall analyse both positive and negative impacts of abiding by the law and rational conclusion is presented at a later stage.
At the outlay, there are several reasons why many people prefer to abide by the law and one of them is to live peacefully and make people disciplined. As the initial penalty for breaking the law, verbal warnings are introduced, it is then followed by a written warning and a fine. Depends on the cause of breaking the law, people may face jail time, a life sentence or death penalty in some countries. With respect to an academic article published at Harvard University with regard to law, it is revealed that enforcing the law helps people towards refuge.
Nevertheless, there are some people argue law is an obstruction for a peaceful lifestyle. Hence, it is asserted that minority of people tend to amend the law to benefit individual needs. Moreover, it is argued that harsh punishments such as life sentences, death penalty are cruel and it violates human rights and yet, authorities tend to enforce the law to civilise the society.
While there are strong arguments to support both sides of the case, my opinion is that to enforce law helps to discipline people and I strongly believe law shapes up human behaviour tremendously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, while, such as, with regard to, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87692307692 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60167219781 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561538461538 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2655233135 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.272727273 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180658823731 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779480860663 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356059340446 0.071462118173 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123730401156 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278306842367 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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