One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is the colossal upsurge on the debate that the regions affect successful persons. There is a widespread concern that some people believe the success of a person depends upon where they are born whereas, proponents argue on it. In my opinion, I totally agree with this statement which is warranted and merits serious considerations.
There are many arguments in favour of my stance but the most preponderant one lies in the fact that a successful person is who is grown up in the well-facilitated area. In fact, not only does a person living in a developed place achieves success in a short span of time but also they do a lot of progress in life. We can find overwhelming evidence in support of the fact that people living in the least developed countries of Africa will always worry where to collect food from and never go on the way to be a great person. Needless to say, all these demerits stand the progress of a person in bad stead, as far as the birth region is concerned.
Moreover, another pivotal aspect of this argument is that a man living in the region having no any type of basic needs can never have other wishes than it. Besides, they can never dream of other things. For example, there are a number of researches by various government bodies that show that people living in the mountain region of Nepal always struggle for food to eat and clothes to wear. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of regions that affect successful persons.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of being a resident of a developed region for being a renowned person in life are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... that a man living in the region having no any type of basic needs can never have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, for example, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 31.9359605911 153% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 305.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59672131148 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56281473182 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544262295082 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.2495291877 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.833333333 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282040023401 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105682377097 0.0925447433944 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769701080879 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1666686179 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499842140661 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.5310837438 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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