Medical technology helps to live long life is that curse or blessing for society and mankind
One of the conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in all people in believe in medical health line all dangerous diseases can be cured now. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that people are getting order because the best medicines are available today, treatment of all types of disease available for kids, young, average and older are available cannot contribute to big reason is for unemployment because older people is very long but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages its offers not only can one benefit more when it’s come to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives with much easy, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
There are, however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential of increase population fast because people death average is very low but birth average is very high its not god for world, human life. Big reason of population increase marriage early to age 18 or 19.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude today disease is very dangerous but medical line is fast growing but population is increase fast.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...his and I will explain why in this essay There are a number of arguments in favor...
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...he potential of increase population fast because people death average is very low...
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...very low but birth average is very high its not god for world, human life. Big reas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87072243346 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61124562417 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574144486692 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.4049318177 50.4703680194 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.333333333 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2222222222 20.9669160288 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 7.25397266985 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0816915949079 0.242375264174 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030001801288 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0241216802214 0.071462118173 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0469904804161 0.151781067708 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00922440083914 0.0609392437508 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.1260098522 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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