Most high-level jobs are done by men. Should governments encourage that a certain percentage of these jobs be reserved for women? What is your opinion?
In this globalised world, most of the high-level companies prefer man than women. The demand of men in high-level job market is a debatable topic. The role of governments for providing chances for women in the same field as like man is very important. this essay will discuss why governments should urge to give equal preference for women in the same profile jobs.
equality in everywhere with regardless of sex is important in this savvy era. women are equally capable as men in the level of education. they reach each and every corner of the world. but some inequality is still going around the world, as we can in some organizations where they prefer to take more men than women. they argue that in their profession or men are highly qualified because of the higher productivity and efficiency of work.
On the other hand, some people fight for the women empowerment in all the field. they bring up their rights in everywhere especially in job market because they are equally qualified as men. they fight for the rights and will force government to legislate new laws to include women for the high-level professions and to increase the preference in the jobs in top-level companies.
equality among job market is important but it could be based on the profession. people can study according to their interest but all the profession may not suit for everyone. Top-level companies may think about their profit, so they need experienced people who provides better quality and efficient work for the company. so, in my opinion companies can prefer the people according to their wish. I never encourage government should make a certain percentage jobs for women.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96441281139 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66732566588 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53024911032 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.351228805 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0588235294 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5294117647 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35294117647 7.25397266985 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334732085317 0.242375264174 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118419017295 0.0925447433944 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10939893392 0.071462118173 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210893038186 0.151781067708 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680393170093 0.0609392437508 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.