In my view the both gender have same dignity, freedom and rights. In future there is any changes, the united nation raise voice against for gender violation and gender equality.
In high level monarchy which always dominated by men authority. the government does not provide any separate reservation for women workers. I pen down, Due to some sake women are not motivated because of the male gender mind think about how to kept them in lower category.
In early decade women are prohibited to do job, they have certain limitation and the culture also invited that tredition. According to the statics the government provide 30 percentage rights to women as compare men have 50% rights, so 20% of priority higher than women. For example, men handle women like production machinery.
Nowadays, it is changed male gender hook up the female to grow and provided equal rights and government also implemented law both gender have same emotion, feeling. So, they too have equal rights and freedom like as men. The higher post/ job is selected by talent and knowledge of the person, if he/she deserved it to access. For instance, our honourable chief minister of Tamil Nadu J. jayalitha deserve the place, it is the post which rule the entity state of Tamil Nadu.
In my view the both gender have same dignity, freedom and rights. In future there is any changes, the united nation raise voice against for gender violation and gender equality.
To conclude, the government work with democracy and justified the equal rights. The young generation are crystal clear about laws and respect others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...hich always dominated by men authority. the government does not provide any separat...
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Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are any changes'?
Suggestion: there are any changes
... dignity, freedom and rights. In future there is any changes, the united nation raise voice against ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98305084746 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43662858524 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631355932203 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0917715716 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7333333333 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.25397266985 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392962217439 0.242375264174 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128670687546 0.0925447433944 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.217014679193 0.071462118173 304% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26531613246 0.151781067708 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.370088605083 0.0609392437508 607% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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