Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons or individual countries. In other words, it is an international problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree
In the contemporary world, due to rapid increase in the establishment of industrial society and population growth has resulted in growth of environmental problems. As per my point of view, for solving this problem require overall unity of all countries joining hands and should be considered as an international concern. I will elaborate my viewpoints in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, single individual cannot change the world. We all have to join our hands in accordance to make our society clean and green. For instance, South Korea are testing different nuclear explosive weapons in their land but its due bad effect is reflected on the environment of United States , likewise untimely rains, sudden weather changes. Hence, environmental concern is a need of an hour.
Probing further, some developing countries like India and Bhutan don’t have effective legit legislation to halt the environment related issues. So, united nation organization has published an legal agreement regarding the stringent action abolishment against the countries which are not following their rules and regulations.
In conclusion, it is being rightly said that unity is strength. Therefore, all countries should take pledge in eradicating the problems of environments related concerns, as it cannot be solved single handedly.
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...nited nation organization has published an legal agreement regarding the stringent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, likewise, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 202.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59405940594 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05347997533 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69801980198 0.580463131201 120% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5383866951 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.727272727 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115271398955 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423553826668 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420871761131 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066165204082 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324200745276 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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