Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Discuss

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Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Discuss

People are working more and more hours these days compared to few decades back. It is getting more common and also causing lot of health and mental problems for the workers. This essay will discuss why people work too much these days.
Money has become an important factor to live in the human lives and everybody is after the money. With the high increment of inflation and fact that they are living in the city, people have to make more money in order to survive in the current society. For instance, money which someone need to survive for a month in a rural area is barely enough to survive for a week in a large city. This caused people to work more and more hours and earn money.
In addition, this extension of their working hours causes them to forget their personal lives and focus only in the job. These days, both parents work more than ten hours a day and there is not anyone to take care their children. For example, the bond between parents and children is weaken greatly due to these problems and cause many domestic problems. Too much work has led people to forget personal life and become robots.
This essay discussed the reason why people have to spend too much time at the work and problems causing in their personal lives due to that. In my opinion, working too much has become essential for humans and forget them that they have a personal life as well.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...more and more hours these days compared to few decades back. It is getting more co...
^^
Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'weakened'.
Suggestion: weakened
...he bond between parents and children is weaken greatly due to these problems and cause...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that they have a personal life as well.
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50199203187 5.00649968141 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.99454025338 2.71678728327 73% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505976095618 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 355.5 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2378533926 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.9230769231 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35261760435 0.242375264174 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136358275055 0.0925447433944 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12452972118 0.071462118173 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245965554963 0.151781067708 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166701637576 0.0609392437508 274% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 53.1260098522 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.9458128079 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 11.5310837438 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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