Nowadays, television is an essential part of our lives, as a medium to spread news and awareness, and, for some, it even acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?
Television, which is one of the most great inventions by mankind has become the most vital part of life for everyone. Not just of spreading news and information, it also becomes a member in every family these days. My opinion is always on supporting this invention which has made a revolution in itself. In this essay, some of the advantages and reasons are discussed.
First of all, the main benefit of this medium is to carry the information from every part of the world to people across the Globe. Secondly, it has created a lot of awareness and education to even the population from remote areas. Apart from this, it telecasts different programs from varied cultures which helped in knowing about different nations.
Further, a lot of regional and international channels and programs help in improving the academic, science and travel knowledges to wide range of childrens from various backgrounds. On top of it, fitness, cooking and many informative channels helps the individual to get access to wide range of information in an easy way.
All things considered, the advantages of this tiny box is vast and it has become an essential part and companion for every individual in a family. Hence, as per my all the positive factors, I would say that,television has created a massive transformation in the society in a more positive way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, apart from, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96460176991 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90424627215 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588495575221 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2769553167 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185733653832 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649306337404 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476561712785 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975542024479 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502062905506 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.