parents should be held legally responsible

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, hence, so, thus, while, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33486238532 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72568174308 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600917431193 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6064164831 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9166666667 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306636177037 0.242375264174 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104469114715 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159660533367 0.071462118173 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187777368567 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106269045077 0.0609392437508 174% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

The importance of parents should be held legally responsible for their children's acts which was always has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the latter proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

There are myriad of reason which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact is that parents full support for children's. Consequently, children respect of parents. Another pivotal aspect of this trend children holidays help of parents home work. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.

Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effects is that children time spend with parent dinner together and television together. Besides, parents should be held legally responsible for children's because children full need to parents support. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of this trend.

According to the arguments aforementioned above, can to reach a conclusion that the effects of legally responsible are indeed too great to ignore.