In the past 100 years, path breaking inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers have changed the very concept of living. What do you think has been the most important invention for the past 100 years? Why?
With the advancement of the technology a number of inventions and discoveries has taken place in the last few decades. These inventions include medical advancements, technological devices and transportation facilities. Out of these inventions computer is the most dominating one. This essay will argue why the computer has been the most significant discovery for the last few years.
There are a myriad of benefits of computer in daily life that make it more significant device. First and foremost, it has increased the speed and efficiency of work in business organizations. For example, companies using electronic devices for keeping daily records and for other major works have the more accuracy than manual records.
Secondly, people use computers for their daily chores like keeping records, producing accurate data. These are also used for recreational activities by the children and adults. Various advertising companies and other manufacturing units use the electronic devices for their daily works.
Every positivity also has some negativity, thus there are some demerits of computers as well. People can use computers for some wrong purposes which can harm the society and businesses. There are some technical issues related to electronic devices such hacking, hanging and so on.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out the conclusion, that beside having some demerits computers are useful devices that has changed the concept of living in past hundred years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'inventions'' or 'invention's'?
Suggestion: inventions'; invention's
...transportation facilities. Out of these inventions computer is the most dominating one. Th...
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Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...for the last few years. There are a myriad of benefits of computer in daily life t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56768558952 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93097365844 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589519650655 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9719264611 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0714285714 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18549293302 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643554946908 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518764230671 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101838508529 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561011946521 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 53.1260098522 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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