People are moving to urban areas from rural areas for better life. What do you think about?
it is often argued that people from the country sides move to big cities to make their lives more comfortable. A vast majority of people opine that migrating to urban areas will make life better. However, others refute this supposition and think that it has adverse ramifications. In my opinion, i strongly believe that life is significantly better in metropolitans. this essay will first elucidate the pertinent points of view to substantiate my assertions, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, it is without a show of doubt that metropolitans provide more employment than rural areas. As a matter of fact, most high paying companies are all located in the cities. To cite a prime example, a recent study shows that a staggering 80 percent of graduates from far away communities migrate to big cities to find an employment that pays a huge amount of money. Thus, it is quite evident that urban areas attract a huge number of people because of employment opportunities.
Furthermore, big cities is where most commercial establishments are situated. it means that people migrate from country sides because they cannot find all they want and needs in these areas. For instance, a research showed that 80 percent of a county's major commercial establishments are in the metro. Hence, it is clear that life in big cities is better due to availability of shops.
In conclusion, considering what has been discussed above, life indeed is more comfortable in urban areas. I strongly recommend that people who wants to improve their way of living must move to a bigger city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01515151515 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94247729566 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4456230066 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.2666666667 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259626817569 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765327878634 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732820254876 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141225000054 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053874395482 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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