People are moving to urban areas from rural areas for better life. What do you think about?
Urbanization is growing at a rapid pace and there is a drastic movement of population from rural areas to urban areas. This creates a lot of adverse impacts on both the urban and rural communities. This essay will analyze various reasons for this move and its impacts.
To begin with, one major reason for the migration is, job opportunities. People in rural areas get more employment opportunities in cities. There are also better transportation facilities and health facilities as compared to rural areas. Furthermore, children can get good education which will fetch them good jobs in near future. Because of all the facilities people prefer cities to rural areas.
However, migration from rural to urban areas creates many adverse impacts on the society. The population distribution will be uneven, and this creates many fluctuations in the economy consequently. With more population in cities, there will be scarcity of resources and the prices will also rise significantly. There is high probability of crime rates to increase, with decreased resources of food, cloth and shelter.
Considering all the above points, it is evident that there is deteriorating impact on the national economy. Hence, from my personal perspective, I believe that this migration from rural to urban areas should be abolished and government should take measures to mitigate the problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 331, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ll fetch them good jobs in near future. Because of all the facilities people prefer cit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33640552995 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94303047199 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3172032214 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.7142857143 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256634773942 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885497415502 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880594828598 0.071462118173 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156345978346 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505789451351 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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