People pursue dangerous activities like skydiving, motorcycle sports, white-water river rafting etc. Do you support? If yes, why and if not, why?
Fifteen years into the new millennium and extreme sports such as sky diving, mountaineering expeditions, river rafting and snorkeling among many others are gaining popularity. many adventurers say that such activities give them a ‘high’ they want, while others indulge in the activity to look ‘cool’.
Jumping from a plane at a height 31,000 feet can sound very erratic but many people do it to get an adrenaline rush – ‘the high’. life has become very predictable and thus boring. To break this monotony, many people take up adventure sports; to do something completely different and unexpected. Moreover, researchers also claim that repetitive or similar extreme sports do not give people the same level adrenaline rush that they got at first. thus, the next extreme sport adventurers pick is often even more dangerous.
Undoubtedly such sports are very dangerous and life threatening. There have been incidences in past when people have suffered serious injuries and some have even lost lives. thus, governments have made very stringent laws to make sure everyone’s safety.
Being an extreme sport enthusiast myself, in my opinion, people must take up these adventurous sports after ensuring that the organization or the tutor that they have tied up with ensures their safety and takes all possible measures for the same.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...w millennium and extreme sports such as sky diving, mountaineering expeditions, river raft...
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Suggestion: Many
...ong many others are gaining popularity. many adventurers say that such activities gi...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rers say that such activities give them a 'high' they want, while other...
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Suggestion: Life
...adrenaline rush – 'the high'. life has become very predictable and thus bo...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...adrenaline rush that they got at first. thus, the next extreme sport adventurers pic...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...injuries and some have even lost lives. thus, governments have made very stringent l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, thus, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43661971831 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97580003296 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69014084507 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.195544326 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.272727273 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0846239148246 0.242375264174 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331972467034 0.0925447433944 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275655156406 0.071462118173 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0472459653491 0.151781067708 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243680291913 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.