Positive and negative impact of information through Mass Media. Discuss your opinion.
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people about the information communication among tow parties through Mass Media. While it is possible to claim that update mass media such as internet has negative effects, in my point of view that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, I will explain my view by analysing negative and positive impacts that we can gain from data sharing through mass media.
First and foremost, there are list of advantages and opportunities can list related to this topic, such as fast and efficient data sharing, more accurate data sharing, reliability and easy of use. Among those, efficiency plays a major role, and it enchants most of the end users in to this media. For example, one email can access from India to Africa with in few seconds more accurately and securely using Gmail. Therefore, it is taken in to consideration that, information sharing through mass media as best standard way in the modern world and it has bend with modern computer technology as a composition.
On the other hand, some set of people argue with a different view point, that the communication through the mass media has more negative effects. They prove the argument pointing the white hat hacker’s interactions as the main reason and those hackers use back doors to hijack other people data, while reducing the integrity. But in the modern world, there are several technology tools are available to overcome these issues with in a minimum time.
In conclusion, it is strongly believed that communication through mass media consist more advantages and it is an essential part of a day today life, because there are no other options. In a nutshell, I strongly believe that governments’ and professionals’ interference is essential to mitigate the miner issues in to a certain extent in a secure manner.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 308.0 242.827586207 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0974025974 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96690010029 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.6025667031 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.833333333 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.25397266985 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244555479736 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924327059731 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932612569524 0.071462118173 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14825776392 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103668086404 0.0609392437508 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.