small shops are replaced by large shopping malls
Large shopping malls have become the norm for the past decade. They have considerably replaced the small local shops but
only to an extent. However one cannot say that it has affected the local economy considering the fact that everyone cannot
afford to buy products from branded showrooms. Consumer's budget is what that separates large and small shops.
Large shopping malls have incredibly risen over the past decade which shows the development of our country. This can also
be connected with the reduction of people under the poverty line. Recent years has shown that almost everyone has migrated
from local shops to the bigger ones. This is because of the media and advertisements which plugged in the idea that only
the branded items are the best products in the market. Eventually, consumers have turned their back on local shops and they
have shifted their base to bigger showrooms.
Large malls create more income and that has boosted the countries economy a lot. The local economy has not fallen either
and that credit should only go the consumers. A consumers budget is very important as not everyone can afford to buy in
bigger shops. A simple middle-class family will only go for smaller shops as that would suit their budget, for example, if a shirt cost 300 to 500 in smaller shops then a branded shop would cost a minimum of 2000. Thus the cost difference is
what that makes the smaller shop stand out only because of this the local economy is still intact.
In conclusion, until there are people who can only buy from small shops the bigger malls cannot replace them overall as
in reality, the balance between both is still hanging equally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 57, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...te more income and that has boosted the countries economy a lot. The local economy has no...
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Line 13, column 215, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...nded shop would cost a minimum of 2000. Thus the cost difference is what that makes...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, then, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91578947368 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29032786378 2.71678728327 84% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512280701754 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7422248888 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.12807881773 339% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38646267269 0.242375264174 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131354217469 0.0925447433944 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114232962736 0.071462118173 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127561349777 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139420417299 0.0609392437508 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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