Smoking should be banned in all the public places. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A typical day reveals that today smoking has been one of the prominent topic in the contemporary discussions. People always used to analyze and explain that smoking should be banned in the public places. Regarding this topic I will explain in the next paragraphs.
To begin with, smoke is done in the every part of the world. Mostly elder people like to smoke but now days teenagers are in the compact of smoke. Moreover many teenagers have lost their life because exaggerate causes many diseases which may lead to death. Exaggerate contains nicotine which causes cancer and lungs diseases. People are addictive to the nicotine which is present in the exaggerate which they smoke and maximum nicotine got stick to lungs which causes problems. Passive smoker can develop cancer of lungs and mouth. Person who is sitting near to the smoker also get affected because smoke of exaggerate travel very fast towards the heart and develop some Golgi bodies in heart which may cause heart attack.
At last, smoking may adversely affect fetus during pregnancy. For example, problems like it will affect the growth of baby or also it will affect the uterus of women. According to analysis above forty percent women can't give birth to baby just because of this smoke. So this should be stopped.
In conclusion, smoking should be banned in the public place. People who didn't smoke are also getting effected. To stop this government have to make some rules regarding this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95075757576 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30991979376 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564393939394 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3784356245 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6111111111 104.977214359 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21763823762 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845884488246 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104502842904 0.071462118173 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158106088325 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755646450379 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 12.6369458128 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.0 Out of 90
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