Recently, the phenomenon of more convenient and easier life by computers and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by computer cannot be highly beneficial in a complex life, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that computer invention was a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support computer effects on people's life. At first, less exercise than our ancestors and more physical diseases is a disadvantage of computer living. However, the computer has made our life easier. For example, more accurate medical diagnoses by computer machines such as MRI made the determinations for medicines easier than before.
In addition, digital databases based on computer programs provided more space to save data. For instance, a recent scientific research undertaken by a reputable university has shown that a significant number of companies and people store their information in virtual spaces such as cloud drive in order to remove actual archives. The computer also made the data processing extremely faster than last decades.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this topic, I profoundly believe that the benefits of computers for human life far outweighed its drawback. Not only for people, but also for the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43946188341 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95560942935 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650224215247 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6125503549 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.083333333 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.25397266985 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284148455581 0.242375264174 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114876902882 0.0925447433944 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807829276636 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162877326729 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912908615128 0.0609392437508 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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