Some people think that benefit from going to private school ,other,however feel that private secondary schools can have negative effect on society as whole. discuss both views and give your opinion.
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection an typical day reveals advantages of private school education but other people oppose this thing .They argue that several negative effect on private school has been one of the prominent topic in the contemporary discussion people have always been intrigued to analyze and explain the both side of views before arriving at a logical conclusion.
Looking at the brighter side of the fence ,to embark with the several positive effect of private school education it is the better quality of education and provide a lots of facility .I would cite an example of recreational activity it is best way for learning skills. There is one more error in the quiver private school staff is well educate in lots of knowledgeable tutor and excellent infrastructure as compare to government school.
Looking at the darker side of the nations, the fact cannot be ignored that one of the major drawback of private school education it is more expansive as compare to government school .There is no astonishment in the pointed that peer pressure on their students and competition their classmates for obtaining good marks this fact sometime create a big problem. For exemplify sometime student not achieve their goal they can commit suicide.
Before putting my pen down I would like encapsulate my viewpoint by saying that study in private school it is difficult to decide which views better or not .Both ways have their own benefit its depend of people which idea consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04198473282 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68654847043 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587786259542 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.5024630542 180% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.864972975 50.4703680194 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.714285714 104.977214359 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.4285714286 20.9669160288 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.25397266985 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279040096754 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122994887812 0.0925447433944 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791991668411 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166162005469 0.151781067708 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641084056365 0.0609392437508 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 12.6369458128 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.9458128079 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.3980295567 162% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.5123152709 200% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.